Killian and the Black Blade!

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2 thoughts on “Killian and the Black Blade!

  1. Bud Sturguess's avatar

    I loved the wonderful use of language here. “She tickles my notions of the otherworldly.”
    “I refuse to take you seriously when you say things like that.”
    This story was so good. A bit of CS Lewis to it. Great work, C.A. Shoultz.

  2. Nick Gallup's avatar

    A very entertaining story. I know so little about the real world of competitive fencing. I do now, thanks to you. I thought I had the ending figured out, that the Black Blade was a former opponent who the feisty Killian had humiliated in less-than-lady-like fashion, perhaps even insulting her. So she had thrown herself into intense training to improve her skills and return to extract her revenge against Killian. What other reason cold there be for her showing up dressed like Zorro if not to right a wrong done to her? Think Scaramouche. Anyway, excellent job. I’m off now to read “The Names Devine.”

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